Friday, October 25, 2019
Discription
7 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hi Johann
ReplyDeleteI like your wiring like the part wen he dose a back flip
and i thing that you need some more wiring and also i like that you eating bannaes from Munashe
Hello Johann
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing.I also like the black backrownd.
That also reminds me of my first post.can you do more enfomachon about the creatures? Did you know that the grey words are very hard to see can you try and fix that up.
From your new buddy Lukas.
Thank you Lukas
DeleteHey Johann,
ReplyDeleteI like you put monkeys are funny because they are. I also did a discription.
How about adding more stuff to each animal. Have you seen a monkey?
From: Sonny.
Thank you Sonny
DeleteThank you Munashe
ReplyDeleteHi Johann,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used your senses in your descriptive writing.Hear,see,smell,eat and the other one is touch.Keep up the good work Johann.
Trish Wakefield